Q: A survey was carried out by the Literary Society of your learning institution on the decline in the English Language performance. As a secretary of the society, you are asked to write a report on the survey. Your report should integrate all the information given below. You should write 150 to 200 words.
Performances of the learners from the year
2002 until 2004
The data informed about the performance of the
learners and the causes that lead to the decline in the performance of the English
Language Result.
Firstly, the
number of students who scored C’s in English dominated with a gradual increase
while there is a small portion of students who scored on A’s being a minority
for each year. There is a plateau growth from 2002 until 2003 and it’s sharply
decrease in 2004, for the students who failed because most of them have
performed well in English. Next, the fundamental reason that contributed to the
declining of performance of students by 43% is they think that English is not a
compulsory paper to pass. Most of their parents did not encourage them to
perform well that lead to the causes of decreasing of English Language Result
by 15%. The number of students who got A’s and B’s collapsed from 2002 to 2003
and it is flatten out for 2004 due to the shortage of trained English teachers
and lack of English reading materials.
As a
settlement, by encouraging students to practice English in their daily life, equipping
more trained teachers and reading extra English materials will induce the
performances of the students to perform well .
3 comments:
the overall essay is good and the elaborations are quite well.. however, don't you think that this essay should be in past tense? because the data is about something that had happen.. that's all.. thank you..
Salam 'Alaik. May allah bless our day. I want to add something about your report, don't you think that the reporter must be included in this report?? that's all..jzk!
salam...thanks for the comments,
honestly..we forgot to include our group name..written by miracle
still,do consider that we are still novices..we'll take it as a reminder..
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