Friday, March 2, 2012

A survey on the performances of the learners in English Language

Q:  A survey was carried out by the Literary Society of your learning institution on the decline in the English Language performance. As a secretary of the society, you are asked to write a report on the survey. Your report should integrate all the information given below. You should write 150 to 200 words.

Performances of the learners from the year
 2002 until 2004

 The data informed about the performance of the learners and the causes that lead to the decline in the performance of the English Language Result.

Firstly, the number of students who scored C’s in English dominated with a gradual increase while there is a small portion of students who scored on A’s being a minority for each year. There is a plateau growth from 2002 until 2003 and it’s sharply decrease in 2004, for the students who failed because most of them have performed well in English. Next, the fundamental reason that contributed to the declining of performance of students by 43% is they think that English is not a compulsory paper to pass. Most of their parents did not encourage them to perform well that lead to the causes of decreasing of English Language Result by 15%. The number of students who got A’s and B’s collapsed from 2002 to 2003 and it is flatten out for 2004 due to the shortage of trained English teachers and lack of English reading materials.

As a settlement, by encouraging students to practice English in their daily life, equipping more trained teachers and reading extra English materials will induce the performances of the students to perform well .


zati abby mirul said...

the overall essay is good and the elaborations are quite well.. however, don't you think that this essay should be in past tense? because the data is about something that had happen.. that's all.. thank you..

~WARM~ said...

Salam 'Alaik. May allah bless our day. I want to add something about your report, don't you think that the reporter must be included in this report?? that's all..jzk!

miracleous1_3dr said...

salam...thanks for the comments,
honestly..we forgot to include our group name..written by miracle
still,do consider that we are still novices..we'll take it as a reminder..